Kashi's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Flash]

:/

Simply put, it doesn't look like this piece had that much effort put into it.
My favorite part is the writing and footsteps in the sand, but I still have my sore spots about that too. The perspective for them is off.
As for the water, it has a nice shifting effect and is decent, but, given alll of the movement shown in the forefront, the horizon should not be a perfect line.
The clouds definetely need work. The center of the clouds should actually be darkest if the moon is behind them.
Do I see a skull/happy face on the moon? Lol :3

Luwano responds:

It really is a skull face. :)

I agree on most of your points, thanks for pointing them out. Unfortunately my horizon reference had a flat line, but now that I looked at some more, I realized it's definitely an exception and looks better with some movement.

I didn't put mich much effort in it? That hurts Kashi.... ouch....

Just kidding I really appreciate your critique, thanks!

[Night Dip - Flood the Portal 3]

Okay.

Looking good.
I think the hair should have blended into the water more. And the strand in the front looks really out of place.

[Flood the Portal Friday 3]

Hehe.

I would keep this picture if I were you. Don't delete it!
I really like how much you took this theme to heart. This is my favorite piece not only because it is beautiful, but because it fits the theme, literally.
You said it yourself: "A water creature, painted with water."
My only complaint is about the eye. The way the shadows curve and the overall shape makes it look as if the eye is protruding out of the side of its head. But, compared to the rest of the piece, I consider this a minor flaw.
Really good job. :)

[Mulla the Fisherman]

welp...

As much as the B&W fits, it takes away from the whole "water" aspect of this month's flood.
Perhaps making the water (or even the sky, for that matter) an unsaturated shade of blue might add to make the piece more interesting.
I like the hands. Enough detail to make your point. Nondescript enough so it doesn't take away from the simplicity of the rest of the piece.
I think the fishing pole could use more detail. Perhaps a more modernized fishing pole, with a reel. The pole itself should be thicker unless all he is trying to catch are guppies. Most fish can break that rod in two :P
And like I said in the thread earlier, oyu need to work on clothing. It is very questionable and bland. Learn the way clothes fold over the skin and form creases and shadows. There are many tuts out there, but you can use yourself or others, or a website with stock images, as your guide.
Good luck and great work.

[The Door to Hell]

ha.

dont go around using your age as an excuse. you just make yourself look like a child whos using any excuse they can so people dont pick on them. just because you can throw some lines down in Flash when you are 15 doesnt mean anything.
as for your drawing, your anatomy and perspective are off. work on your fire too.

oldGanon responds:

Thanks for the Review. ^^

[Mr. Glow Flower]

awww

hes so damn adorable :3
i love the way you shaded it
but i think you couldve done something with the wing, its too.... flat

Luxembourg responds:

Oh, thanks, Kakashi!
I agree with you about the wing; it's a habit of mine, I just tack little wings (usually little bat wings) onto creatures I draw. I never really think about whether or not they look accurate or if they have depth. I really should have made it look better.
Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!

[Steampunk P-bot]

no, uh-uh dont like it

ZERO ZERO ZERO ZERO
after all, it looks nothinglike M-Bot
so try harder
:P jk
really good job ash
i really like what you did with the eyes too

[WWll(italy)]

why do you post this?

it is terrible and, i agree with davaca: it took about 20 seconds in paint
and the worst part is: you couldnt even take the time to make the columns even (if you notice, the red is far bigger than the white and green)
you can at least put effort into something, because at this point, even stick figures kick your drawing's ass

[WWll(red army)]

well

it still is not difficult, and if you are going to post this crap you can use a tip in paint: instead of using the airbrush use the curve tool for your sickle

and Eyego stfu im american and people know that the british participateed in WWII.
The only reason we "took all the credit (as you put it)" is because we ended the damn war that Britain couldnt
just because one person doesnt understand history doesnt mean its your responsibility to call out every american saying they dont know history

[WWll{nazi)]

wow....

when you make art like this, especially when it is this terrible, its a wonder you dont get scouted
so, as my part of constructive criticism, try somethin that is actuakly challllenging to make; a red background with a white circle and some crappy black lines wont get you respect, especially if theyre of nazis
asshole