Kashi's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Green Flash]

:/

Simply put, it doesn't look like this piece had that much effort put into it.
My favorite part is the writing and footsteps in the sand, but I still have my sore spots about that too. The perspective for them is off.
As for the water, it has a nice shifting effect and is decent, but, given alll of the movement shown in the forefront, the horizon should not be a perfect line.
The clouds definetely need work. The center of the clouds should actually be darkest if the moon is behind them.
Do I see a skull/happy face on the moon? Lol :3

Luwano responds:

It really is a skull face. :)

I agree on most of your points, thanks for pointing them out. Unfortunately my horizon reference had a flat line, but now that I looked at some more, I realized it's definitely an exception and looks better with some movement.

I didn't put mich much effort in it? That hurts Kashi.... ouch....

Just kidding I really appreciate your critique, thanks!

[Night Dip - Flood the Portal 3]

Okay.

Looking good.
I think the hair should have blended into the water more. And the strand in the front looks really out of place.

[Mulla the Fisherman]

welp...

As much as the B&W fits, it takes away from the whole "water" aspect of this month's flood.
Perhaps making the water (or even the sky, for that matter) an unsaturated shade of blue might add to make the piece more interesting.
I like the hands. Enough detail to make your point. Nondescript enough so it doesn't take away from the simplicity of the rest of the piece.
I think the fishing pole could use more detail. Perhaps a more modernized fishing pole, with a reel. The pole itself should be thicker unless all he is trying to catch are guppies. Most fish can break that rod in two :P
And like I said in the thread earlier, oyu need to work on clothing. It is very questionable and bland. Learn the way clothes fold over the skin and form creases and shadows. There are many tuts out there, but you can use yourself or others, or a website with stock images, as your guide.
Good luck and great work.

[The Door to Hell]

ha.

dont go around using your age as an excuse. you just make yourself look like a child whos using any excuse they can so people dont pick on them. just because you can throw some lines down in Flash when you are 15 doesnt mean anything.
as for your drawing, your anatomy and perspective are off. work on your fire too.

oldGanon responds:

Thanks for the Review. ^^

[Mr. Glow Flower]

awww

hes so damn adorable :3
i love the way you shaded it
but i think you couldve done something with the wing, its too.... flat

Luxembourg responds:

Oh, thanks, Kakashi!
I agree with you about the wing; it's a habit of mine, I just tack little wings (usually little bat wings) onto creatures I draw. I never really think about whether or not they look accurate or if they have depth. I really should have made it look better.
Thanks for the review! Glad you like it!